What do u think of this poem which I wrote for someone who I love?

our relationship comes to the end today even though we love each other.this is the first poem that I ever wrote in my life,at least the one which I tried to write,is it good?should I send it to her?


I wish you knew how much I love you, but I know you do,


I wish my heart was made of stone so it wouldn鈥檛 break, but it鈥檚 glass and it broke,


I wish my heart was hard and I never loved you, but it鈥檚 soft and I fall for you,


I wish I didn鈥檛 have tears so I wouldn鈥檛 cry, but I have and it turned my eyes to ocean,


I wish I was a child and I forget you, but I鈥檓 just a child for you


I wish I couldn鈥檛 dream so I wouldn鈥檛 see you, but my life is just a dream,


I wish you were here with me in real life, but life is just too cruel,


I wish you always remember me, but I don鈥檛 want you to,


I wish I would never wished like this, but I鈥檓 just too weak for you,


What do u think of this poem which I wrote for someone who I love?
I really love this!What do u think of this poem which I wrote for someone who I love?
it is great i like it did you break up or wat is the deal?
par excellent i too wrote this one just now 4 someone


we two r in the same bpat but pl do not despair lets be fair read on pl





DESPAIR





My Love I wake up for your love dear,





I go to sleep,as dreams make me feel near,





And make me gain confidence that you're close,





In an imperfect world, we all unwantedly chose,








Yet when I awake I miss the warmth I craved,





My fantasy and imagination I so honestly braved,





And I fall back again from the stair,





My dear in utterly miserable, oh this, despair.








My innate desire to spend a whole life,





As your dear lovelingly and only wife.





Perhaps that was what you did always desire,





And the flame of fire in me, you did fire.











I cannot imagine a day without your love, I say,





Crossing the path without a miss,a loving kiss,





For your warmth through your lips, so soft and sweet,





I thought these were my gift, a life's eternal treat.











I miss your warmth and loving embrace,





I do not know when and how, I fell from grace.





Your lovely look,youe eyes, and beautiful smile





I always possessed and will possess all the while.








You are as always and shall for ever be,





The love of my years' that went before me.





A life, a heart throb, a summer's cream,





For all times you are an indellibe dream.








A welcoming whisper in the sands of hour,





You are as fragrant as many a flower,





Your looking away from me, I could never tolerate,





Remember this my love, whenever we did date.








I cannot believe my ears,for what you did appear to say,





An intense feeling I want to hold, with a nay,





That you never said, what I thought I heard,





And incredibly deny to ever believe a word.








What made you think I was just a playful toy,





Just to hold for a while and enjoy,





What made you think of me that so low,





Say it all was just not said ,let my heart glow.











Just once, just once more, think about that small one,





And think of the part in me that has now begun.





Think of our tomorrow and the next morrow,





Just for once take me out of this unbearable sorrow.














Come back to me my life, my breath,my love ,





There is nothing left for me on earth or heaven above,





And come back to my arms once again,





My life, my very being, please do not leave me in vain.








''HELLO CANADA''

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